PsychoKiller
The Hunt for the Zodiac.
by
Charles Proser
BLACKNESS
MUSIC - PSYCHO-KILLER
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
What follows is true. Names have been changed... There is a
killer out there. He has killed at least twenty people in twenty years,
possibly more. Possibly many more. He has never been caught. He has eluded the
police. He is lucky. He is brilliant. And he
is insane. He calls himself...
A SLASH RIPS THE DARKNESS, TOP TO BOTTOM. ANOTHER SLASH CROSSES
IT, LEFT TO RIGHT. PULL BACK TO REVEAL A CIRCLE SUPERIMPOSED. THE ENDS OF THIS
CROSS STICK OUT FROM THE CIRCLE. THIS IS THE SIGN FOR...
GRAYSMITH (V.O.)
...Zodiac.
EXT. SAN FRANCISCO SKYLINE - TODAY - STREET NOISE UNDER.
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
At one time this city lived in fear. And if we don't fear
now, it is not because we are
safer, it is simply because we have
forgotten...
+MONTAGE - THE CITY - THE
PEOPLE
We live in a rational universe, a society of laws...at least we
think we do. But every so often that fabric is ripped apart, and from below we
glimpse the feral eyes of the beast.
+DEAD EYES - STARE PSYCHOTICALLY OUT AT US
They asked me if I fear him.
I do.
I believe I have seen him
up close.
+A ROOM - ROBERT
GRAYSMITH, THE NARRATOR.
He is thin, with dark circles under sunken eyes. He is sallow,
disheveled, obsessed, perhaps, in his own way...mad.
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
I believe I have looked into
those eyes. I believe I have seen there what his victims have seen. And
now I fear weakness. I fear circumstance.
SERIES OF DISSOLVES - LOCKED CAMERA - GRAYSMITH
Sitting on bed, staring out the window, brooding, staring at
papers covered with weird symbols tacked on the wall.
I fear the bad luck to find myself at his mercy for he has none.
I fear his fear, for his victims are the weak, the isolated, the trusting. He
is a coward and a thief of life. I don't want to glamorize this killer, because
the fear and pain he has caused others reflects what he has caused himself. He
must deny those dark impulses and keep them in check. He must deny himself
those pleasures. He must contain the beast. He must hide. We are looking for
him.
THE SKYLINE AGAIN -
DISSOLVE TO:
+MATCH ANGLE - 1969 - STOCK - THE MODERN BUILDINGS FADE AWAY
MUSIC SEGUES to something from era: Sympathy
for the Devil.
GRAYSMITH (V.O.)
We have not heard from him for some time. But that means
nothing...
PAN OUT OVER THE GOLDEN GATE BRIDGE AS NIGHT FALLS.
GRAYSMITH (V.O.)
There are unsolved murders in every city, in every state. And no
one knows... It could be him, it could be others like him. Nobody knows.
+SERIES OF SHOTS ENDING ON THE ROLLING HILLS OVER VALLEJO
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
If you know anything about him...if anything you see now could
possibly help...please ...contact the police.
EXT. LAKE HERMAN ROAD - NIGHT - A COUNTRY LOVER'S LANE.
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
It started...we think it started twenty years ago..on a
lonely lover's lane...
VALLEJO,
CALIFORNIA
DECEMBER 1968
A car's headlights illuminate the trees as it moves slowly down
the lane. It crests a hill. In the distance a Rambler stationwagon is parked near
a fence.
RAMBLER
David and Betty Lou neck. David is a high-school student, Betty
Lou is a pretty, sixteen year-old. Headlights bounce off the mirror and into
their faces. They break and come up for air. Betty giggles and straightens her
dress. She kisses him. He puts his hands on the wheel and waits for the car to
pass. But the car moves slowly. David is impatient.
DAVID
Come
on, come on. We haven't got all night
She laughs.
PARKING LOT
The car doesn't pass. It pulls up next to them on the right, ten
feet away. The dark figure hunched over the wheel is stocky. He turns his head... a glint of light off glasses.
RAMBLER
Betty Lou turns in alarm.
BETTY
LOU
What is it?
DAVID
I don't know.
BETTY
LOU
A cop.
DAVID
I don't know.
BETTY
LOU
What's he want?
A car passes, lights sweeping over the scene. The figure turns,
avoiding the light. He doesn't look like a cop.
DAVID
Uh oh..!
David locks all doors. Now Betty Lou is scared.
BETTY
LOU
David...Let's go.
David fumbles with keys. SQUEAK. Man rolls his window down.
MAN
Please?
DAVID
What?
MAN
Get out of the car.
Betty Lou is frozen with fear.
DAVID
Roll up your window.
BETTY
LOU
What? Oh.
Her window, nearest the stranger is open, but she is too
terrified to move. David tries to start the car. It grinds.
DAVID
Darn...come on..come on!
The man opens his door. As he gets out, something catches the
light. A gun. The man glares at Betty Lou. She's rigid. The man stalks towards
David. He pauses, takes aim.
INSIDE CAR
They cower. Window implodes, showering glass. They scream.
OUTSIDE CAR
The man fires into the left rear wheel housing. Both teenagers
scramble to the passenger side. He races around to meet them. Betty Lou is out,
David sliding across the seat. The man reaches through the open window, puts
the gun to David's head and fires. Betty Lou screams and runs up the road. The
man races after her, gun extended. On the run, he fires five times. The bullets
hit in a tight pattern and drive her forward into the dirt, dead.
INT. ARLENE'S HOUSE - VALLEJO February 26, 1969
KAREN, 14, goes to front window, looks out on the street.
HER POV
A white sedan sits at the curb. A glow flickers as a man lights a
cigarette. He is heavyset, with curly dark brown hair; possibly middle aged. He
starts the car, pulls away.
GRAYSMITH (V.O.)
His next victim may have
known him.
BATHROOM - DARLENE
She is twenty-two but looks seventeen. She has a cute,
kewpie-doll look, braces, short light brown hair. She's a dead ringer for Betty
Lou. She is putting on makeup, listening to loud Rock music. KAREN has just
said something. DARLENE pauses, turns to her, concerned.
DARLENE
What did the car look like?
KAREN
Light colored, maybe white... A sedan. I couldn't see the license plate. It was too dark.
DARLENE
He's checking up on me again. I heard he was back. He doesn't
want anyone to know what I saw him do.
Karen is confused. Darlene turns back to the mirror, mutters
something... one syllable ...a name. We can't hear it.
KAREN
Who?
Darlene turns back to her makeup, doesn't answer.
INT. FERRIS HOUSE - NEXT DAY - FEBRUARY 27, 1969
Darlene's younger sister, PAM, hears something at the door. She
puts down a magazine, crosses and opens it. A stocky man, curly haired, with
glasses is putting a package on the step. He sees her and straightens up. His
face is obscured by daylight on the screen.
MAN
...For Darlene...
PAM
Who are you? Did you
leave the other packages too?
MAN
This is for Darlene. Under no circumstances are you to open this.
Understand?
He stares at her, his manner menacing. She closes door, puts
package down, returns to window. He is sitting in his car.
OUTSIDE HOUSE - LATER
Darlene pulls up. The white car is gone. She goes inside.
INSIDE HOUSE
DARLENE walks in.
DARLENE
Anything come for me?
Pam gives her the package, waits for her to open it.
PAM
I saw him. Same guy.
Darlene takes the package into the back room. Pam follows.
PAM
What is it?
Darlene doesn't answer. She grabs the phone, closes the
door on Pam. Pam listens at door, worried, mystified. Phone is dialed. A low
murmur. The door slams open, startling
Pam.
DARLENE
Come on, get your things!
PAM
Where we going?
DARLENE
I'm taking you home.
EXT. HOUSE - WEEKS LATER
Another sister, LINDA, arrives with bags of beer and chips.
INSIDE HOUSE - A FEW
GUYS, PAM, KAREN AND ANOTHER WOMAN.
A painting party is going on.
Karen is leaving in a hurry.
LINDA
Where are you going?
KAREN
Away from here!
LINDA
What's the matter.
KAREN
Some of these guys are weird.
They
give me the creeps.
Karen leaves. Linda turns. Guys paint and screw around in
spattered clothes. But over on the couch, three guys sit who are
strange. Linda looks them over. One is heavyset, older, with dark-rimmed glasses. Linda pushes
through.
+BEDROOM
Darlene sits on bed, sipping beer, looking haggard. She sees Linda, gets up and hugs her hard. She's
near tears.
LINDA
Hey Sis. How are you?
DARLENE
(distractedly)
Oh...fine.
LINDA
What's the matter?
DARLENE
Just go, Linda. Just go.
LINDA
What is it?
DARLENE
That guy out there.
LINDA
What guy?
DARLENE
The one in the chair. He's
got no business being here. Stay away from him.
She goes to the door, stands to the side, looks through. He sits
Sphinx-like. She turns back. Darlene sits, shaking.
LINDA
Darlene, what's wrong?
Linda turns away. Darlene jumps up, holding her back.
DARLENE
Linda, don't go near him.
Just don't talk to him.
LINDA
Why? Who is he?
DARLENE
Don't talk to him! Leave. Now!
LIVING ROOM
Darlene appears, sees Pam with the man. She pulls Pam away.
DARLENE
Why are you talking to him?
PAM
Why not?
DARLENE
You're telling him too much.
PAM
I thought you were dating
the guy, the way he talks.
A guy says something inaudible. Darlene answers him.
DARLENE
Don't worry about it, nobody's going to hurt me. Nobody's going
to do anything.
She pushes Pam out the door. Darlene is stopped by the man. Pam
can't hear the conversation but feels the tension.
HOUSE
Darlene joins her outside.
DARLENE
There's gonna be some big things happening in the next few days.
It's really something.
PAM
What?
DARLENE
I can't tell you, but you'll read about it in the paper.
EXT. NIGHT - MIKE MAGEAU'S HOUSE
She honks, Mike appears. He is 20, 6'2', thin. He runs out
leaving the door open, lights on, TV blasting. Darlene gestures impatiently for
him to get in. They pull away.... From the shadows, a light sedan pulls out
behind them.
INT. CORVAIR
MIKE
We're being followed.
Darlene guns it. Second car speeds up too. She turns, roars down
side streets. The pursuer blasts closer and faster.
MIKE
Oh, no, no, no, go straight!
But the car cuts them off.
DARLENE
I can't. He won't let me.
DARK ROAD - A SIGN: BLUE ROCK SPRINGS GOLF COURSE
Darlene swings into a parking lot. WHOOMPH! She hits a log,
grinds to a stop. The engine stalls. The couple sits in darkness, breathing
hard. The pursuer pulls up to them. Headlights go out. Mike looks at the car.
MIKE
Do you know who it is?
Darlene sits, facing front, silent. Finally she speaks.
DARLENE
Never mind. Don't worry
about it.
Suddenly, the car roars off. Mike sighs relief. Just as suddenly,
a car roars back, parks on the left rear, in the cut-off technique cops use.
Suddenly, a powerful light is beamed at them. A man emerges, advances toward
them.
MIKE
Here come the cops, you
better get your ID out.
The man strides to the passenger side. The blinding light
explodes in Mike's eyes. Clink of metal
against the window frame. A muzzle flash, A ROAR! The gun fires again, again.
Sudden silence. Darlene is still. The killer turns and walks
away. Mike moves. He cries out. The gunman stops, turns slowly and looks over
the shoulder of his Navy windbreaker in Mike's direction. He is 26-30, has
crew-cut curly brown hair. He is heavyset, 195-200 pounds; about 5'8. A slight
pot-belly hangs over pleated pants. He slowly moves in again. He leans in
through the window, fires two shots. Mike kicks spasmodically, drives himself
into the back seat. The man fires twice at Darlene, gets in his car and peels
away.
INT. VALLEJO POLICE STATION - SWITCHBOARD - 12:38 A.M
It lights, operator answers, hears breathing, a soft voice.
MAN
I.want.to.report.a.double. murder.
OPERATOR
What is your...
MAN
...If.you.will. go.one .mile. east. on.Columbus. Parkway.to. the.
public. park,you.will. find. kids.in. a.brown. car.
The voice is even, as if he is reading the statement. It is soft
but forceful. Cop tries to interrupt but he continues..
MAN
They.
were. shot. with. a.9. Millimeter.
Luger.I. also.killed. those.kids. last. year.
(The voice deepens, taunting)
Good bye.
EXT. PHONEBOOTH
The killer hangs up. Suddenly, the phone rings. A passer-by
glances over. The killer steps out of the booth, turns his head away. He
unhooks the phone, lets it hang. He walks off. The booth is right in front of
the Vallejo Police Dept.
INT. DAY - SAN FRANCISCO CHRONICLE
AVERY walks fast through the city room. He bumps into people,
murmurs excuses. He rushes to the door to the editorial room, knocks quickly
and bursts through.
+EDITORIAL ROOM
PUBLISHER, EDITOR and a CARTOONIST look up, startled.
AVERY
Excuse me. I...We just got this.
He offers a letter. He holds it gingerly by the corner. The
cartoonist, GRAYSMITH, takes it. Recognize him as NARRATOR, but he is younger,
fit. As he reads, his smile fades.
GRAYSMITH
Dear Editor
This is the murderer of the 2 teenagers
last Christmass at Lake Herman & the
girl on the 4th of July near the golf
course in Vallejo To prove I killed them
I shall state some facts which only I
and the police know....Christmass..
+FLASHBACK GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
KILLER'S the
boy was on his back feet to the car
POV the
girl was on her right side feet to the west
4th
July - girl was wearing patterned slaksd s
lacks.The
boy was also shotin the knee.
GRAYSMITH - thin, intense, with deepset eyes.
+ INSERT - CU - PAPER FALLS OUT OF ENVELOPE - STRANGE WRITING...
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
I
want you to print this cipher on
the front page of your paper. In
this cipher is my identity.
ANGLE - GRAYSMITH
GRAYSMITH
If you do not print this cipher by the afternoon of Fry. 1st of
Aug 69, I will go on a kill rampage Fry. night. I will cruse around all weekend killing lone people
in the night then move on to kill again, untill I end up with a dozen people
over the weekend.
+ INSERT - CU CIPHER
NAVAL
OFFICER (V.O.)
...Eight lines, seventeen symbols each. Greek symbols, Morse
code, weather symbols, alphabet characters, navy semaphore, and astrological
symbols...
INT. OFFICE - NAVAL INTELLIGENCE LAB
A naval officer hands a copy of the cipher to ENNIS, a cop.
NAVAL
OFFICER
...I'm sorry. It's a complex cipher and it's not long enough.
ENNIS
You can't crack it?
NAVAL
OFFICER
Not from this. I've sent it to the National Security Agency and
the CIA.....They've drawn a blank too.
+ INSERT - CU CHRONICLE HEADLINE
"CODED CLUE IN MURDERS"
"This
code may conceal Vallejo killer's identity."
+ INSERT - ECU FRONT PAGE - CRYPTOGRAM
SALINAS - DAWN
SMALL TOWN south of San Francisco. Harden, a forty year-old
history teacher picks his Chronicle off the lawn, is transfixed by the
headline.
INT. HARDEN HOUSE - BOOKSHELF -
Hand takes book, Secret and Urgent, by Pratt.
SUNNY ROOM
Harden lays out pencils, paper. His wife Bettye enters, watches,
curious.
HARDEN
A cipher...systematically rearranges letters, or substitutes
other symbols for the alphabet.
(She leans
over)
Assume that it's in English. E is the most common letter in
English. Then T, A, O, N, I, R, and S. The most commonly doubled letters are L,
E, and S.
ANGLE - MUCH LATER
She brings tea. He works... crumpled paper all over.
HARDEN
It's a substitution cipher. But
he used so many different symbols.. You have to..search for
patterns...
ANGLE - LATER
The house is dark. He hasn't noticed. He stands and stretches,
exhausted.
HARDEN
Well, in theory, anything encoded can be decoded... In theory...
MORNING LIGHT
She enters with coffee, Harden is tired, beaten. He throws the pencil across the room in
frustration.
HARDEN
He's a maniac!!!
She picks the pencil up. A sudden thought! She gets interested, sits.
BETTYE
He's an egomaniac. He probably started with I.
...and he would speak of killing. How about.. "I like killing.."
HARDEN
There's a double L in kill. And he probably used kill more than
once.
+ INSERT - CU CIPHER -
His pencil moves across it.
He counts off spaces. Where the LL would be, he finds triangle, half
semaphore... He looks down the cipher. He finds it again. And again.
MATCH DISSOLVE - CIPHER DECODED
I LIKE KILLING
PEOPLE BECAUSE IT IS SO MUCH FUN.
HARDEN ON THE PHONE
HARDEN
Hello, Night Editor?!!
INT. CHRONICLE - NIGHT EDITOR
He slumps over desk, both bored and exhausted.
NIGHT
ED.
Yeah, sure. Well, just
send it in.
INT. CHRONICLE - DAYS LATER - GRAYSMITH, ED. PUB. enters.
PUBLISHER
Another letter?
EDITOR
More detail. He wants us to know how he shot her, how
clever he is.
GRAYSMITH
(reading from
letter)
...THE
POLICE WERE WONDERING AS TO HOW I
COULD SHOOT & HIT MY VICTIMS IN
THE DARK.
+FLASHBACK - WHAT i DID
WAS TAPE A SMALL PENCEL
KILLER'S FLASHLIGHT
TO THE BARREL OF MY GUN.
POV ALL
I HAD TO DO WAS SPRAY THEM... NO ADDRESS.
PUBLISHER
Nice guy.
Avery knocks and enters with piece of paper.
EDITOR
What's that?
AVERY
The cipher. Somebody broke it.
PUBLISHER
Naval Intelligence?
AVERY
No. Some amateur. A history professor.
+ INSERT - CU CIPHER
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
I
LIKE KILLING PEOPLE BECAUSE IT IS SO
MUCH FUN. IT IS MORE FUN THAN KILLING
WILD GAME IN THE FOREST BECAUSE
MAN IS THE MOST DANGEROUS
GAME OF ALL.
MOVE IN ON GRAYSMITH - repulsed but fascinated.
GRAYSMITH
TO
KILL GIVES ME MOST THRILLING EXPERIENCE IT IS EVEN BETTER THAN GETTING ROCKS
OFF WITH A GIRL THE BEST PART IS THAE
WHEN I DIE I WILL BE REBORN IN PARADICE AND THEI HAVE KILLED WILL BECOME MY SLAVES I WILL NOT GIVE YOU MY
NAME BECAUSE YOU WILL TRY TO SLOI DOWN
OR ATOP MY COLLECTIOG OF SLAVES FOR AFTERLIFE
+ INSERT - CU CIPHER EBEORIETMEMETHHPITI
EDITOR
(V.O.)
What's that last word?
MCU - GRAYSMITH SHRUGS
GRAYSMITH
An anagram for his name?
PUBLISHER
Print it. Maybe some amateur will figure it out.
INT. RESEARCH LIBRARY - GRAYSMITH STUDYING
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
Fifty five different characters, a very complicated cipher.
Experts couldn't break it, so they thought Zodiac was an expert. An amateur
broke it. Maybe the killer was an amateur too!
We now knew which letter of the alphabet each symbol stood for, but...
how did the killer arrive at his choice of symbols.
+ INSERT - CU BOOK - The Codebreakers
Inside, is an alphabet. Zodiac's alphabet is put alongside it. A
pencil underlines... Twenty six characters match.
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
...strange symbols, almost religious ...triangles, circles, squares,
crosses. I remembered hearing of the cipher used during the Middle Ages. It was
a picture alphabet designed to appear mystical, an alphabet described as
"vastly impressive and sinister."
+ INSERT - CU BOOK - Codes and Ciphers - The symbols match.
PAN UP - TO CHAPTER TITLE - ZODIAC ALPHABET
+ INSERT - CU CIPHER
...WHEN I DIE I WILL BE REBORN IN PARADICE
AND THEI HAVE KILLED WILL BECOME MY
SLAVES...
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
Odd mixture...Christian and ancient cult beliefs... Southeast
Asia... Some... Satan- worshipping cults...He feels his fellow man looks down
on him. The belief that his victims would be his slaves in an afterlife
reflects a paranoid delusion of grandeur ... expressed through a belief common
among primitive peoples throughout history.
+DESERT ISLAND - BLACK AND WHITE NIGHT. (STOCK)
Count Zaroff, a tall, mad Russian with a jagged scar on his
forehead looms over his prisoners.
ZAROFF
My life has been one glorious hunt. It would be impossible for me
to tell you how many animals I have killed. One night as I lay in my tent with
this... this head of mine, a terrible thought crept like a snake into my brain:
hunting was beginning to bore me... When I lost my love for hunting, I lost my
love of life, of love. Here on my island I hunt the most dangerous game...
ANGLE - HIS HUMAN CAPTIVES, TERRIFIED
ZAROFF
Only after the kill does man know the true ecstasy of love. It is
the natural instinct. Kill, then love! When you have known that, you
have known ecstasy!
A CHILLING HOWL - With his pack of black mastiffs, the Count,
dressed in black, his costume's folds gathered and cinched at wrists and
ankles, a foot-long knife in a sheath on his left side, a rifle in his right
hand, races through the fog in pursuit of a young couple.
EXT. THEATRE - SF STREET - NIGHT -
Graysmith and a girl walk out of theatre and into the wet, foggy
streets. She has chills and snuggles against him.
GRAYSMITH
...because it's a classic!..
MICHELLE
It's sick...who watches this stuff?
GRAYSMITH
I'd sure like to know.
MICHELLE
It gives me the creeps. I hate it. Robert don't get involved in
this. You're a cartoonist. This won't make a good cartoon. Why don't you leave
this to the police reporters?
GRAYSMITH
You know what else... About the killer? He broods about being cut off from his fellow man...Compares the
thrill of killing to the satisfaction of sex. Probaby can't get it up. The
taunting notes, phone calls... that's a plea to be found out, exposed. If he's
cornered, a grandiose paranoid might kill himself, as a grand gesture, to
punish the world for its neglect.
MICHELLE
Jesus!
They EXIT FRAME REVEALING marquee: THE MOST DANGEROUS GAME.
GRAYSMITH (V.O.)
She was right. I never expected
to get involved. But...
+LAKE BERRYESSA - NORTHEAST OF THE BAY AREA - SEPT. 20, 1969
Three girls pull into a parking spot. Another car, driven by a
lone man pulls in beside them and backs up. He sits, head down as though
reading. The car is a light colored Chevy.
GIRL
1
What's this guy want?
GIRL
2
What'dya think!
GIRL
1
Pervert!...
THE LAKE - LATER - SAME GIRLS SUNBATHING.
One looks up, sees same man watching them.
GIRL
1
Oh, great!
GIRL
2
What?
GIRL
1
Nothing. Just the weirdo again.
GIRL
2
Ignore him. Maybe he'll go away.
A FINGER OF LAND, A LOW PENINSULA JUTS INTO THE LAKE - LATER
Bryan Hartnell, tall, good-looking; and Cecilia Ann Shepard,
small light-haired; both college students, lie on a blanket at the tip of the
peninsula talking. Cecilia looks up, notices something. A man, stocky and
powerful, stands watching them. She can't make out his face, it's too far away.
He vanishes into a grove of trees.
BRYAN
What is it?
CECILIA
Nothing...just a man.
She stops and stares off...
CECILIA
Uh oh... we've got company.
Bryan is on his back, his head toward the advancing man. She is
on her stomach facing him, her head on Bryan's shoulder. The man is suddenly
very close. He is menacing; walking slowly, heavily. Dust blows into Cecilia's
eye. When she raises her head again, the man is gone. Bryan doesn't turn
around, but Cecilia is alarmed. Sudden rustling of leaves!
BRYAN
You have your specs on? What's the deal over there?
CECILIA
It's that man.
BRYAN
Is he alone?
CECILIA
He just stepped behind a tree.
He turns over.
BRYAN
Well, keep looking, tell
me what happens.
CECILIA
My God, he's got a gun!
They turn, the man steps out from behind a tree, walks toward
them. He wears a black hood, square on top. It hangs down to his waist.On his
chest is a cross over a circle - the Zodiac. Slits are cut for mouth and eyes,
with dark snap-on sunglasses over them. Dark sleeves are clamped tightly over
his wrists, trousers tucked into boots. On his left side hangs a knife, a foot
long, in a sheath. On his right side is an empty holster. White plastic, hollow
core clothes-line hangs from beneath his jacket. He is big, and solid. His
right hand extends toward them. It holds a blue semiautomatic pistol.
Bryan and Cecilia freeze in the twilight. The man resembles a
Medieval Executioner. The voice is a calm monotone.
MAN
I want your money and your
car
keys. I want your car
to go to Mexico.
BRYAN'S POV - ECU
Beneath slits in hood, sweaty brown hair...a glint; Glasses?
BRYAN - fumbles in his pocket.
BRYAN
I've only got a little...
He hands over the money and keys. The Man pockets the change,
throws keys on the blanket and puts the gun away.
BRYAN
There's no strings attached. I don't have any money right now,
but if you need help that badly I can help you out in another way maybe.
MAN
No. Time's running short. I'm an escaped convict from Deer Lodge,
Montana. I've killed a prison guard there. I have a stolen car and nothing to
lose. I'm flat broke.
BRYAN
Well, man, wouldn't you rather be stuck on a stealing charge than
a threat of homicide?
MAN
Just don't start playing hero on me. Don't try to grab the gun.
BRYAN
You're wasting time with me.
I got a billfold and this much change and that's it.
The man detaches clothesline. His KNIFE...is a copy of Zaroff's.
MAN
Lie face down on the ground.
I'm gonna have to tie you up.
Bryan, annoyed and defiant, stands up...
BRYAN
Hey, wait a minute.
MAN
Get down. Get back down.
Bryan is forced down next to Cecilia...He whispers to her.
BRYAN
You know, I think I can get
that gun. Do you mind?
CECILIA
No, Bryan. Be careful.
I'm scared.
The man turns to Cecilia.
MAN
You tie the boy up.
Cecilia ties him, loosely. She throws his wallet to the man. The
man ties Cecilia tightly. His hands... When he touches Cecilia, they begin to
shake... He tightens the knots on Bryan. He leans up...something weird!
MAN
I'm getting nervous.
BRYAN
(trying to appear
calm)
Okay, now that this is over,
will you show me if the gun
was loaded?
The man opens the gun and pulls out a .45 cartridge. Bryan turns
away to look at Cecilia. The man stands above them.
MAN
I'm going to have to stab you people.
Bryan and Cecilia are terrified as the knife comes out.
BRYAN
Please stab me first. I'm chicken.
I couldn't stand to see her stabbed.
MAN
I'll do just that.
The man drops to his knees. He stabs the boy again and again.
Blood spurts over Cecilia's face. She screams for him to stop. Bryan moans and
collapses. The man turns toward the
girl, she tries to wriggle away. THE HOOD sucks in and out with his heavy
breathing. He gives a ghastly, frenzied sound...a long, low exhalation. He
begins stabbing the girl. She rolls on her back.
CECILIA
Stop. Stop. Stop...
She twists and writhes. Madly the figure stabs. Again. Again. At
her chest, her back, her side...It's like sex. Bryan watches helplessly. He
turns away, fakes death.
SATED AT LAST, the man stands, tosses the money and keys on the
blanket and walks into the twilight.
PARKING LOT - BRYAN'S VW KARMAN GHIA
The man kneels by the door.
THE CRIME SCENE - LATER
Bryan opens his eyes, yells for help. He slithers to Cecilia
chews through her clothesline. Weakly, she unties his hands.
EXT/INT. NAPA POLICE
DEPT. 7:40 P.M.
The phone rings. Officer Slaight answers.
MAN
(V.O.)
(calm...monotone)
I.want.to.report.a.murder-- no.a.double murder They. are.two.
miles. north .of. Park Headquarters.
They. were. in.a. white. Karmann. Ghia.
Long pause
SLAIGHT
Where are you?
MAN
(V.O.)
(barely audible)
I'm.the.one.that.did.it.
(HANGS UP)
SLAIGHT
Is anyone there?... anyone there?
He listens closely: SFX passing cars, voices in B. G.
EXT. PHONEBOOTH - MAIN STREET - NAPA - SHORT TIME LATER
Police dry the phone with a blower and lift a palm print.
CRIME SCENE - LATER
DETECTIVE KENNETH NARLOW
IS ANGRY.
NARLOW
What's this?
TECH
Park Rangers gathered the
evidence and put it in a
box for you.
NARLOW
(disgusted)
Great!
He leans down, looks at the VW's Door. -- in felt-tip pen...
Vallejo
12-20-68, 7-4-69
Sept 27-69-6:30
by knife
ANGLES - CRIME SCENE
HEAVY COP walks along the killer's tracks. A TECH measures the
impressions, makes a cast of a footprint.
TECH
From the compaction of the sand, figure he weighs...about 220.
Was walking, not running. Look here, between the heel and sole...
ECU - IMPRESSION OF THE BOOT - A CIRCLE WITH PRINTING
DISSOLVE:
+INSERT - THE IMPRESSION
becomes a high-contrast print.
NARLOW (V.O.)
Wing walkers.. 103,700 pairs were distributed to Air Force and
Navy installations on the west coast.
EXT. NIGHT - VALLEJO STREETS - DESERTED
GRAYSMITH
(V.O.)
Nine days later, Cecilia Shepard died. Napa residents were told
to say out of remote areas. The town of Vallejo became a wasteland at night.
+INSERT - MATCH DISSOLVES - COMPOSITE SKETCH IN PROGRESS.
V.O. The college girls direct a police sketch artist.
GRAYSMITH (V.O.)
He attacked in areas of confused police jurisdiction. The victims
were young couples. He attacked on weekends; near holidays... at dusk or night.
He had more hatred for women. Twice, the man survived.
Robbery was not a motive. He used a different weapon each time.
Plunging a knife into someone is almost sexual. It's the most intimate contact
you can have with a victim. It's where the Zodiac got his thrills. He had a
compulsion to brag about the murders. He killed in remote lover's lanes... around
or in cars... near water. And...the killings were coming closer and closer
together.
+SAN FRANCISCO - THEATRE DISTRICT - NIGHT - OCTOBER 11, 1969
A cab pulls up near the Curran Theatre. Crowds exit the musical,
HAIR. Cab driver, PAUL STINE, edges forward. A figure steps up, looks down at
Stine.
STINE'S POV
Man is silhouetted, showing skull through crew-cut hair.
MAN
Maple and Washington.
+PRESIDIO HEIGHTS - NIGHT AND FOG.
- EXPENSIVE OLD HOMES. The cab pulls up at Washington and Cherry.
INT. CAB - FROM BACK SEAT.
Abruptly, the stranger presses a gun to Stine's head. With his
left arm, he seizes Stine's throat. Stine struggles.
EXT. CAB
A FLASH lights interior, a muffled report. Rear door opens, the
stranger gets out, gets in the passenger side, front.
EXT. SECOND FLOOR WINDOW ACROSS STREET
A young girl appears.
INT. A TEEN PARTY
She is drawn to the window, by something outside.
HER POV - CAB
A stocky man, holds the head of the driver in his lap. He is
doing something to the driver. Then he wipes down the cab.
INT. PARTY
Others crowd around her, looking out at the cab.
THEIR POV
The man is struggling with or searching the driver.
SFX - PHONE DIALS, RINGS, IS PICKED UP.
POL.OPERATOR
(V.O.)
Police
Department.
YOUNG
GIRL (V.O.)
(panicked,
hysterical)
...Yes..I want to report...I don't know...a crime...a hold up...
a shooting...I think....
+SFPD SWITCHBOARD
An officer starts filling out Crime Report Card.
POL.OPERATOR
Your address?
EXT. STREET - THEIR POV -
CAB
MAN GETS OUT
YOUNG
GIRL (V.O.)
Washington and Cherry. Hurry..he's..
He comes around cab, wipes down the driver's door, mirror.
The stranger opens the driver's door and wipes down the dashboard
again. To steady himself he leans his right hand on the rail separating the
front and rear windows. The fragment of cloth is still in his right hand.
POL.OPERATOR
(V.O.)
Describe the assailant...
YOUNG
GIRL (V.O.)
His description???....
THE KIDS
...crowd around the phone. They all shout at once...
POLICE OPERATOR
POL.OPERATOR
What? What? Speak
slowly...A what, a big man...a black man...?
+ INSERT - ECU - CRIME REPORT CARD - AS HE MAKES IT OUT.
...NEGRO MALE ADULT
SFPD SWITCHBOARD
Officer jots answers, turns, hands the card to a dispatcher.
EXT. STREETS - PATROL CAR RACES - STOCK
INT. PATROL CAR -
OFFICERS FOUKES AND ZELMS.
DISPATCHER
(V.O.)
Attention all Units. All Points Bulletin. Possible homocide.
Washington and Cherry. Subject Negro Male Adult, Armed and Dangerous. Caution
Urged.
THEIR POV
As they swing by Jackson and Cherry, they see a stocky man
lumbering along in the fog toward the Presidio park.
ZELMS
Nah... He's white.
EXT. STREET - THE STRANGER SHUFFLES ALONG
Patrol car swings up on him and stops. A cop leans out.
ZELMS
Hey, you seen anything unusual in the last
minute or so?
THEIR POV - THE STRANGER
He stops and turns to them. He is standing under a tree, in
shadow, shaded from the street lamp. His hands hang down to his side. A glint
of metal flashes from his right hand. A pause... Then the voice is a calm
monotone.
MAN
..Saw a man. He was waving a gun. He ran
east on Washington.
The patrol car speeds off in that direction.
THE STRANGER
Blood drips slowly from sodden clothes. It makes a puddle at his
feet. He puts the big 9mm automatic back in his belt and walks slowly toward
the dark, wooded park in the distance.
CRIME SCENE - SHORT TIME LATER - FLOODLIGHTS AND POLICE.
Lab guys measure, mark latent prints. A rumpled, sleepy cop pulls
up, gets out, yawning and rubbing his face. DET.CHERKA
CHERKA
Jesus! Four homocides in four days.
What the hell's going on?
He reaches for pad, takes notes, gives usual instructions.
GRAYSMITH (V.O.)
Frank Cherka was the pride of homicide, San Francisco's SuperCop, the real-life model for Steve
McQueen in Bullit.
CHERKA
Preserve the scene. Keep people away from the cab. Nobody touches the vehicle.
CHERKA sketches the scene as his partner, TIM ENNIS - tall,
silver hair, forties, goes over waybill.
CHERKA
Bled profusely. Robbery..?
ENNIS
Took his wallet. Twenty, twenty-five dollars, tops. Left his keys, change. Left the scene
dripping blood. Clumsy.
CHERKA
Yeah. Fucking amateur!
FLASHES
as photogs take angles of
Scene. The body is pulled out and bagged. Cherka leans into the cab; blood all
over the place. He leans down and finds a single 9 mm shell. He turns as Ennis
walks up, pointing toward the Presidio.
ENNIS
Headed that way..
CHERKA
He's
in the park...
+PRESIDIO - NIGHT AND FOG
Police cars, motorcycles blast through, headlights throwing
grotesque shadows. The beams wash over a figure barely discerned. He freezes.
The beams wash back. He's gone. Or was it just a shadow?
POV RUNNING
FLASHERS and SIRENS, SPOTLIGHTS through the TREES THROW WIERD PSYCHEDELIC ACID FLASHES...IMAGES
BURNED into the retina. MURDER...MADNESS!!! A WEIRD SING-SONG, BREATH COMING
HARD, HEART THUMPING and a strange GIGGLING of enjoyment.
A MOTORCYCLE
CRASHES through the
clearing ahead... Dive to the ground...Rushing through bushes...
POV MOTORCYCLE COP - TRAVELING
High speed chase at shadows. RADIO CALL and SIRENS, FLASHING
LIGHTS... SOMETHING FAST from the side. A cruiser blasts from the lane,
swerves, brakes.. THUMP. We bounce off, nearly go down. Up ahead, a figure
disapears into the brush...we ROAR IN after him.
LOW ANGLE
The cycle BLASTS PAST.. PAN ACROSS ...in silhouette A MASSIVE
HEAD, hulking shoulders...a glint from gunmetal...
Then the cycle is gone...flashers retreating in the
distance...Silence descends...The figure is no longer there... the
silhouette...is just the crook of a tree.
EXT. PRESIDIO - CLEARING - IN FOG
Parked patrol cars, FLASHERS rotating RED and BLUE.
Cherka and Ennis, hands thrust deep into their trenchcoats.
Police cars, motorcycles blast through, headlights throwing
grotesque shadows. Cyclist stops at Cherka, shakes head, no.
INT. SFPD - POLICE ARTIST, CHERKA WITH TEENAGERS
CHERKA
How's that?
He shows them a sketch, they nod approval.
+ INSERT - CU COMPOSITE SKETCH OF THE KILLER
INT. SFPD - CHERKA'S OFFICE
- CHERKA, TECH; DAGITZ.
DAGITZ
When he leaned forward to wipe the dash, he held onto the beam.
Middle
+ INSERT - CU PRINT finger,
third finger, right hand. 8 points on two fingers. In blood.
INT. CHRONICLE - AVERY - OCTOBER 14, 1969;
Going through a pile of letters to Editor... He stops.
+ INSERT - CU LETTER
S.F.
Chronicle, San Fran, Calif,
Please
Rush to Editor
Please
Rush to Editor
INT. SFPD - CHERKA, ENNIS'S OFFICE
A knock, door bursts open. Cherka looks up; Graysmith.
GRAYSMITH
Frank, I don't know if this has
any merits. We got this. It's
kind of dirty. There's a bloody piece of cloth.
He drops it on the blotter in front of the cops.
CHERKA
Jesus Christ! This looks like Stine's shirt! How many people touched this letter?
GRAYSMITH
I don't know?
CHERKA
Find out.
He opens EVIDENCE BAG marked 'STINE MURDER.'
CHERKA
I think we're involved in a heavy case
...with a mass murderer.
I think San Francisco is involved.
+ INSERT - CU STINE'S SHIRT - THE BLOODY PIECE - A MATCH
INT. OFFICE - MORRILL - HEAD OF QUESTIONED DOCUMENTS.
Morrill leans over letter.
MORRILL
Bizarre mixture of cursive
letters and printing.
CHERKA
A match.
MORRILL
Oh, yeah.
+ INSERT - CU NEW LETTER - OLD ZODIAC LETTERS - A MATCH.
ZODIAC
(V.O.)
+FLASHBACK THIS IS THE
ZODIAC SPEEKINGAK
MONTAGE I
AM THE MURDERER OF THE TAXI DRIVER
OF OVER BY WASHINGTON
& MAPLE ST LAST NIGHT.
ACTION IING. AM THE SAME MAN WHO DID
IN THE PEOPLE IN
THE NORTH BAY AREA. THE POLICE COULD
HAVECAUGHT ME LAST NIGHT IF
THEY HAD SEARCHED
HIDING THE
PARK PROPERLY INSTEAD OF HOLDING ROAD
FIGURE RACES
WITH THEIR MOTORCICLES. THE DRIVERS
IN SHOULD HAVE JUST PARKED THEIR CARS &
SAT THERE
PARK QUIETLY
WAITING FOR ME TO COME OUT OF COVER.
INT. MORRELL'S OFFICE - CHERKA LOOKS UP.
MORRILL
An ego-nut! He'll
probably concentrate on writing to your department.
CHERKA
San Francisco, Why?
MORRILL
Larger circulation newspapers.
CHERKA
Great. Well, how do we handle this?
+THE LETTER - DETAIL
ZODIAC
(V.O.)
SCHOOL
CHILDREN MAKE NICE TARGETS, I THINK
I SHALL WIPE OUT A SCHOOL BUS SOME MORNING.
JUST SHOOT OUT THE FRONT TIRES & THEN PICK
OFF THE KIDDIES AS THEY COME BOUNCING OUT.
+MONTAGE - HEADLINES, WIRE SERVICE BULLETINS. ETC.
ANNOUNCER
(V.O.)
TO ALL LAW ENFORCEMENT AGENCIES: A San Francisco cabbie was
murdered by an unknown psychotic, who has threatened to attack a school bus.
+MONTAGE - AERIAL - BUSSES ALONG LONELY NAPA ROADS.
ANNOUNCER
(V.O)
TO ALL DRIVERS, IN CASE OF ATTACK:
Continue driving the bus on a flat tire. DO NOT STOP!
ARMED POLICE RIDE ON BUSSES.
Tell the children to get below the windows and lie on the floor.
POLICE TRAILING BUSSES.
The driver will continue driving, turn on all lights, sound the
horn.
TERRIFIED CHILDREN LOOK OUT THE WINDOWS.
The bus shall not be stopped until arriving in a well populated
area.
INT. CHERKA'S OFFICE - PATROLMEN FOUKES AND ZELMS
Distraught, on the brink of tears, they look up at CHERKA.
ZELMS
...the call said a Negro Male...
CHERKA
It's not your fault.
ZELMS
We could 'a had him.
ENNIS
Or he could have had you.
Come on, the artist is here..
+ INSERT - CU - NEW COMPOSITE BEING DRAWN
35-40, thicker jaw. Barrel chested, 200 pounds, 5'8";
reddish-brown crew cut hair, dark-framed glasses.
INT. CHRONICLE - COPYBOYS, AVERY, EDITOR, GRAYSMITH.
They go through mail. Cherka walks in...to fanfare.
AVERY
Hey, Inspector Cherka!
CHERKA
Hey, guys, I want to talk to you about these letters. The
important thing is not to open them, not to handle them in any way. Look for
double postage, inverted stamps. Please Rush to Editor on the front and back,
three or four times...The lettering slants off toward the end. It looks like
this.
He pulls out a xerox, and shows it around.
CHERKA
This is my number. Call me immediately, if you get anything.
He pins it up on the corkboard. He notices Graysmith over to the
side and moves to him. Points at him, miming a gun.
CHERKA
Robert Graysmith!
GRAYSMITH
Hiya Frank...
CHERKA
Saw your cartoon on the Chief.
Boy is he pissed. Be careful where you park your car. Don't jaywalk.
He takes G by the arm, leads him back into the Art Dept. In
Graysmith's cubicle, he notices Zodiac clippings tacked up.
CHERKA
Zodiac eh...What's your
fascination?